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Bluebottle

A87961422 - 'Despicable Me 3' - the Film
Please subscribe to the above. I assume that, as you've added a 'Photo by SashaQ' credit that you'll be submitting a photo? Only I've not seen one as yet.

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SashaQ - happysad

Thanks <BB< smiley - biggrin

I've subscribed smiley - ok

The photo credit was a residue from when I copied the text from DM2, but I do indeed have a photo, so I have made a note to send it in later today smiley - ok


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Post 3

Bluebottle

And we've received it smiley - ta, just awaiting approval.

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Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - ok


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Post 5

Bluebottle

While we await the photo's approval, would you like to thoroughly read through and let me know what you think?

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Post 6

SashaQ - happysad

Thank you smiley - biggrin

Just a few tweaks, please:

Maybe add A27045001 to 'flowing blond hair'

"capsule " --> "capsule-"

"Before Despicable Me, Kristen had various small roles in films and TV shows, but played several characters in the comedy series Saturday Night Live and voices Ruffnut Thorston in the animated How to Train Your Dragon film series (2010-19)." --> "Before Despicable Me, Kristen had various small roles in films and TV shows, but played several characters in the comedy series Saturday Night Live. She voices Ruffnut Thorston in the animated film series How to Train Your Dragon (2010-19)."

"Margo is played by Miranda Cosgrove, who played Lana Lang in the pilot episode of Smallville in 2001" --> "Margo is played by Miranda Cosgrove. She played Lana Lang in the pilot episode of Smallville in 2001" - nice linkage, thanks!

Shall we put a footnote on "Sing! TV talent show" to say something like, "The Illumination Entertainment film Sing! was released in 2016." ?

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Post 7

Bluebottle

I've tweaked those bits so let me know now what you think.

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Post 8

SashaQ - happysad

I am in awe of your knowledge, but I don't always understand, sorry:

"A reference to an upcoming Illumination Entertainment film, Sing! was released in 2016."

Despicable Me 3 was released in 2017, though?


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Post 9

Bluebottle

Changed slightly now, so shall we press the button?

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Post 10

SashaQ - happysad

Excellent - yes, press the button! smiley - ok


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Post 11

Bluebottle

Button pressed!smiley - ok

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