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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hiya Sashasmiley - hug

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SashaQ - happysad

Thanks GB smiley - hug

I have subscribed smiley - ok

On reading through I think a couple of bits could be improved:

trenchfoot (frostbite-like condition caused by persistently wet feet) - better to say "a frostbite-like condition...".

"She was awarded the 1914-15 Star, British War Medal, and her Victory Medal had an oak leaf on it " - need an 'and' between the 1914-15 Star and British War Medal?

Other than that, all good - excellent linkage as always smiley - ok


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Post 3

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

>>a frostbite-like condition<<smiley - biro

smiley - tea

I think that would read better as:
>>She was awarded the 1914-15 Star, the British War Medal, and her Victory Medal had an oak leaf on it because she had been 'mentioned in dispatches'.<<

What do you think?smiley - hug


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SashaQ - happysad

Yes, that's good.

Thank you smiley - hug


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ok you're welcome smiley - hug

All returned nowsmiley - run


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Congratulations! Your Entry is on the Front Page today smiley - magic


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