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Subbing 'Monsters Vs Aliens'
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Feb 14, 2017
Hi Sasha
I have subbed your entry here: A87885058 - please remember to subscribe!
Let me know if everything is ok and I will return it to the Eds for final polish
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Subbing 'Monsters Vs Aliens'
SashaQ - happysad Posted Feb 14, 2017
Hi GB
Thanks for subbing this - I've subscribed
Just a couple of things:
"TV series' such as 30 Rock and Arrested Development" - the apostrophe isn't needed there.
"serious incidents are 'Code Brown' when the president needs to change his pants." - do you think it would read better to say "when President Hathaway needs to change his pants"?
Thank you
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