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Hello Desinc_Scorpio,

nice filing system you got there. I'm polishing your story, 'If Barbie is so Popular' for the UnderGuide. You'll find the new version of it at A3339290

I've changed some punctuation and corrected the odd word, nothing significant. There were some suggestions made in the Alternative Writing Workshop and I wondered if you wanted to take any of them up?

It doesn't look as though you are about much any more but if you stop back in leave me a message, here or at my space, and we can have a natter about the story and see if there's anything else that needs to be done with it.

I enjoyed the story and thought that the punchline was very clever and well delivered. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you come back and share more.


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