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Trin Tragula Started conversation Sep 12, 2007
Hello! I'm in the process of polishing up your five 'Interview' pieces for the UG and I'm now calling round with the details - links to the UG versions follow. Since I see you haven't been around for a while, I've gone ahead and tinkered with formatting, punctuation and so on, but there were a few more major changes which are detailed below. So, here they are!
'festered' - I assumed you meant 'infested' and I've gone ahead and changed it. But I wondered if you meant 'festering' instead?
Be back with the others in a bit
Trin Tragula Posted Sep 12, 2007
Right - here are the others:
I hope you're happy with what's been done. The only query left is this: we're planning on running these over a series of five weeks, so is there any particular order to them? Art World seems to be the first, but after that?
Deety Posted Sep 17, 2007
wow you have done a great Job.."
I have read all the edited versions and they look good, you have done a great job. I couldn’t have done better myself, in fact I didn’t hence I am very happy with what's been done.
Festered / Festering – I was trying to picture up a sort of disease ridden brewing process which was slowly spreading all over the world. – Although after looking it up in the dictionary “Infested” sounds better.
Which Order for a series, I am not sure.. it may depend if you are planning an intro or a narrative like the Post does.
Anyhow here is my five pence worth…
1 Art world (Because it was the first I wrote – it’s a sort of meaning of life type interview…)
2 /3 Book World or Why is the earth round (sort of follow on interviews..)
4 Meaning of wife
5 Artificial intelligence (Sort of end of the world … with us pushing up daisies and machines taking over)
But like I said, depending on the slant you give the series a different order may be better...
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