h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I know what you mean.

and I know and I had to write it....

Just wanted to say I loved your last poem!

must be good not to trip the critique seriously thank you Lady P....

Hmm, vell, it helps vhen you make somezing different, you know?

well my horror collection was different from a lot I have wrote - yes it whymed but in style beyond that rhyme it was nothing like I normally did....



nice to debate this though....

I've still not read them, so can't add anything to this debate.
To be honest, I guess it will take some more time, before I'll be in the right state of mind to read it all, but I'll try,I've always liked your poems - although I only understood few of them

good to see you again Bel... this horror selection and the latest is easy to understand. Especially the horror

I've still a good horror story waiting for me at home, could only take me years to read it
At the moment, I don't really manage to do much more than getting back in touch with friends

well I am just glad you are doing that

Not as much as me, I'd bet
More than three weeks really was a long time

Yeah I know... I had been on and offline for the last month myself - been a interesting time....

Off now for some shoppings, see you later

See you later and take care....

Out for a walk
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Black clouds roaring overhead,
tearing across the sky,
a plane appearing from there mass,
cutting the rain dry.

A wall of falling water approaching,
hammering upon the ground,
the roar of the plane passing over,
fleeing the furious storm.

The drums of the raindrops pouring,
from the leaden sky,
soaked and sagging the clothes I wear,
dragging like a stone.

Same old news same old day
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The world in action with men at war,
the death and killing to right old wrongs,
instead of forgiveness or something new,
we get the weapons that are tried and true.

How long before we finally do destroy,
all the best that mankind has made and done,
in its growth to the top of the food chain,
that we now sacriface in the face of fear,

Can we stop this spiral of death,
before the costs go beyond what we can pay,
can we end the agression,
that happens everyday,

So when this chapter of history ends,
will we be able to say,
that mankind learnt from its past,
and left the evil in its wake?

Well not done a romantic love poem for a long time so this one is dedicated to all that have found love in there lives....

Love in all it's forms
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I,
the me who is willing to dedicate,
every feeling to just one.

Love,
a beautiful powerful thing,
that is unique in everyway.

You,
the person I do adore,
the object of my emotion.

with,
the means that I say and do,
every action that I will fight for you.

all,
that I promise to give,
out of respect in this equal relationship.

my,
the exclamation of me dedicating,
to you with thought word and deed.

Heart,
beating faster with the heat,
of my desire when you I see,

that last one is cool... I might try that sort of thing at a later date

glad you liked it.... came from a simple 9 word statement I made that put into a tic tac tow square made I love you when read diagnolly....

I can imagine it