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subbing 'Akko, Israel'
echomikeromeo Started conversation Nov 8, 2005
Hey LeoAlpha
I'm subbing your entry on Akko - you'll find the new version at A5545442. If you could take a look at that and make sure everything's to your satisfaction, I'd be much obliged. Although I haven't finished putting in all the links yet, the text is all there and so you can go ahead and look at it.
Thanks!
subbing 'Akko, Israel'
echomikeromeo Posted Nov 11, 2005
Just to let you know, I finished adding the links.
subbing 'Akko, Israel'
Leo Posted Nov 14, 2005
>>The fortress was later dismantled by Dahar Al-Omar so that its stones could be used in the city walls and is now underwater. <<
look great.
I just thought that the above sentence was a tad ambiguous. An 'it' between the 'and' and the 'is' would clear that up. I dont think its necessary, but reading it made my editing finger itch.
subbing 'Akko, Israel'
echomikeromeo Posted Nov 15, 2005
Okay. I'll fix that bit and then send it back to the italics.
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