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Your Entry 'Post Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

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h5ringer

Hi Pastey, I've been given your Entry A87726937 Port Street Beer House to sub-edit, so please pop over there and subscribe.

I've made some minor changes and added a few internal links to other Approved Guide Entries. I hope you'll agree, but obviously if you have any problems with what I've done you can let me know via this conversation.

Get back to me when you're happy and I'll press the button to return this Entry to the Eds and thereafter to the FP.

smiley - ale h5ringer


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 2

h5ringer

Just fixing the conversation title smiley - doh


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 3

Pastey

It all looks good to me, thank you smiley - smiley

There is a photo for it, not sure if it's gone into the image library yet though...


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 4

h5ringer

Excellent, I'll leave a note for the Eds when I return it that there's a photo available


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 5

h5ringer

I'm having trouble with this sentence: <>

I'm fairly certain I get your meaning, but the phrasing seems a bit of a square peg in a round hole (I think Gnomon said something similar in the PR thread).

Could we try something like <> An alternative choice of words by yourself would of course be great.

smiley - ale


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 6

h5ringer

Nudge nudge smiley - zen


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 7

Pastey

Sorry, totally forgot smiley - biggrin

I trust the Subs judgement smiley - winkeye


Your Entry 'Port Street Beer House': sub-editor calling

Post 8

h5ringer

Right it's on its way to the FP. As a real smiley - ale fan, I enjoyed this Entry a great deal smiley - ok


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