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Subbing Harry Secombe
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Jan 18, 2021
Hiya BB
I have taken your entry on the lovely Harry to sub-edit here: A88011731
Please go subscribe and I'll get to it when I can
GB 
Subbing Harry Secombe
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jan 28, 2021
>>David and Katy – with Andy becoming Shortly afterwards he made his first professional engagement at the Windmill Theatre, London, which was famous for featuring tableaux of nude women interspersed with comedians expected to do 36 performances a week to an audience who were only really interested in seeing the naked women. <<
Something missing there after "becoming"...?
Subbing Harry Secombe
Bluebottle Posted Jan 28, 2021
Ah - that should read:
'with Andy following his father into show business, notably voicing Watto in the Star Wars prequels and appearing in The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy Radio Show Live.'
I don't mind whether that is in the main body of the text or a 
<BB<
Subbing Harry Secombe
Bluebottle Posted Jan 28, 2021
Except I see I already had it as a footnote, so just delete '– with Andy becoming'.
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Subbing Harry Secombe
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jan 28, 2021
That's it, ready for your ok to return to the Eds for final polish
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