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Subbing American Television Reinventions

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A87885292 American Television Reinventions
A87885878 American Television Reinventions: Drama
A87885337 American Television Reinventions: Comedy
A87885328 American Television Reinventions: Game Shows
A87885319 American Television Reinventions: Reality
A87885300 American Television Reinventions: Family

Hi BB, those are the recommended articles you need to subscribe to. I'll keep all the subbings to this one thread; any queries and I'll post the A-number with the query and let you know when it's all donesmiley - run

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - tea


Subbing American Television Reinventions

Post 2

Bluebottle

It's been a while since we've done a project together - I hope you're not tempted to chuck your telly out the window by the time you're finished!

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Subbing American Television Reinventions

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

No worries, BBsmiley - hug

A87885292 is done subbing, ready for read-through and return to Edssmiley - magic

smiley - run


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Post 4

Bluebottle

I've had a read-through and it looks good to me – you can press that one's button!smiley - ta

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A87885337 - Comedy - >>Mitchell revelled in playing the elder man, and was more than an admirable foil as his wife.<<

I am afraid that doesn't make sensesmiley - erm


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A87885878 - Drama - is done subbing and awaiting ok to returnsmiley - ok


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Post 7

Bluebottle

Re Drama - okay is given. I see you've even sneaked the 'Titanic'/'Total Recall' breast discussion in there toosmiley - winkeye

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Post 8

Bluebottle

Regarding Comedy - yep, that doesn't make much sense. We could change the sentence to 'and many of the series highlights were the interactions between his character and his onscreen wife, Elsie, played by Dandy Nichols.'

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Drama - of course I did, that was too good to lose into the ether!smiley - biggrin

Comedy sentence changed smiley - biro

Moving on to Familysmiley - run


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A87885300 - Family is subbed and awaiting ok to return to Edssmiley - ok


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Post 11

Bluebottle

Looks good to me smiley - smiley
Couple of minor changes
belts or braces. – belts and bracelets (though the expression is braces, they actually wear bracelets)
Heroes (2006-10, Heroes Reborn 2015-16) – Perhaps we should mention the brief revived series?

Other than that, all good!

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

If you want to add anything that's fine, just type it out for me and I'll paste it in (sorry to not be more helpful but Friday is get-Mum-up-and-bathed day) I have been waiting for a Carers Day to pop up but no such luck smiley - sadface and anyway, who cares for carers? smiley - run


Subbing American Television Reinventions

Post 13

Bluebottle

I don't think we need to change much, just tweak the sentence:
'Similarly, television series Heroes (2006-10) also dealt with people with powers.'
To 'Similarly, television series Heroes (2006-10, Heroes Reborn 2014-15</I&gtsmiley - winkeye also dealt with people with powers.'
Other than that it's all good!

Not to worry – I can try to understand how challenging life must besmiley - hug

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - hugreturned, it's Friday evening and I can breathe... smiley - zen

A87885300 - Family all tweaked and returnedsmiley - run


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A87885328 Game Shows is all subbed and awaiting ok to return to Edssmiley - ok

smiley - zoomOnto the last onesmiley - run


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Bluebottle

Looks good to me! Just remember to remove me as a Researcher so that I'm down just as 'additional material by' so that the original author gets all the credit for this one.

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Donesmiley - biro

and returned to Edssmiley - disco

Just the last one to sub nowsmiley - runsmiley - tea


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A87885319 - Reality is done and ready for checking.

This is the one I was dreading - I loathe Big Brother and can't abide Top Gear (easily ignored). But I gritted my teeth and got through it smiley - puff

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - zen


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Bluebottle

Yes, it reads fine to me – I don't watch these programmes either, which you can probably tell as the descriptions in this entry are much shorter than in the otherssmiley - winkeye

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ta and returned to Edssmiley - wizard


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