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Sub-editing 'Opus'
Icy North Started conversation Nov 8, 2007
Hi H5 
Please cast your eye over the sub-edited version at A28678387 and let me know if it looks OK.
I've only made minor formatting changes and added a couple of links.
Icy
Sub-editing 'Opus'
h5ringer Posted Nov 8, 2007
Hello Icy. I've picked up 3 things that need, or I would like, changing:
1. In the first full paragraph: <> please delete the word 'all'. It is a repeat from the previous phrase
2. Could you move the 'Opera' link down to <> in the 'Who started this' section. There it makes a genuine connection to the 'History of Opera' entry.
3. 3rd full paragraph: An em-dash has gone missing in <> between 'output' and 'works'
Can't see anything else
Sub-editing 'Opus'
Icy North Posted Nov 8, 2007
Yes, I wondered how long it would take you to spot those. 
All fixed and submitted. 
See you on the Front Page!
Icy
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