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Subbing Six Sigma

Post 1

Wyatt


Hi, I have Sub-edited your Entry - could you have a look at it to make sure everything fits to your liking? The soon-to-be Edited version is right here: A18107048smiley - cheers


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Post 2

Gavin

The first sentence of the "control" section reads
"Technically speaking, 'Control' is not a phase, in that it continues for as long as the process operates, it is vitally important to ensure the requirements of the process continue to be met. "

I guess this would be better written as
"Technically speaking, 'Control' is not a phase, in that it continues for as long as the process operates. However this is a vital part of the Six Sigma methodology, as it ensures the requirements of the process continue to be met. "


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Post 3

Gavin

Other than that it looks great - thanks.

smiley - run


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Post 4

Wyatt


Fixed.smiley - cheers I'll send it on to the Editors.


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Post 5

Gavin

Many thanks

smiley - run


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