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Malabarista - now with added pony Started conversation May 4, 2009
I sooooo crave some right now!
Anyway, I'm done subbing - mostly just changed a few spellings to BE and put in some commas, of which you don't seem particularly fond
So, here's your Entry, with your photo on display: A50029706
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pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain) Posted May 5, 2009
Nice work, thanks
I see you've fixed the last sentence - I was unhappy with it, but apparently all it needed was a couple of words deleted. It's much better now.
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Malabarista - now with added pony Posted May 5, 2009
I didn't touch the last sentence! And only inserted commas in the one before.
See you on the Front Page. Well done!
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