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Subbing Jump Story

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Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Pailaway!

I'm subbing your Jump Story entry at A41608109. I've a question. In the third repetition, Brer Snake says "I'm I'm sooo cold". Did you intend to repeat that "I'm"?

Aside: In the picture of the mandolin on your space, I can see a reflection of myself in the mirror. It's frightening!


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Post 2

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Thanks for spotting that - I never saw it and there should definitely only be one "I'm"

A reflection of yourself? Then a look of intelligence must have crept across my face. It was only passing, I'm sure smiley - laugh

Thanks for subbing this Gnomon smiley - ok

(By the way, as an experiment, you could print this entry out and read it to a family member and still get them to jump smiley - yikes)


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Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

Do you want to have a quick look over this before I send it back to the Eds?


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Post 4

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Boogeyman is a rural american pronunciation - I see that the link is to an entry on the "bogeyman" Just to be consistent we could change boogeyman to bogeyman.

Other than that it seems fine to me smiley - ok


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Post 5

Gnomon - time to move on

Boogeyman is also the Irish pronunciation. But I'll change it to bogeyman as you suggest.


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