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Hi there

I have been assigned to sub-edit your entry on primary school teaching and would like to ask a few things before I sent it off to the Editors.

The last two things you wrote in your entry where you numbered them, 1,2,
where do they fit in the entry exactly because in the last paragraph, you don't mention anything about them.

Secondly, since have written your entry in plain text, it's not obvious whether there are any sub-headers in your text so just let me know if there are.

I'll tell you more about some things after you respond.

Nitina

Hi Nitina

The 1 and 2 are footnotes, the first from ICT in the third paragraph, the second from the phrase Key Stage under the sub heading Assessment.

The sub headings are: The Curriculum, The Classroom, Teaching and Learning, Planning, Assessment, Inclusion, Gifted and Talented Pupils, Thinking skills and learning styles, Pupils welfare, Rewards and Discipline and Conclusion.

I hope this helps,
Thanks
Cousin Cosmo

Hi

I changed what needed changing. I have included some headers and sub-headers. Have a look and let me know if the sub-headers include the titles you wanted before I sent it off

Hi,

Thanks, that looks great! Much clearer to read. Cheers again
CC