This is the Message Centre for Andy

Subbing Body Building

Post 1

Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Intern. I'm sub-editing your entry on Body Building a A44196979. I'm finding it hard going because I don't know anything about body building, so I'm going to have to ask you some questions.

Eugen Shadow -- did you mean Eugen Sandow?

atlas stones -- what are these?

What's adduction and is it the same as abduction?

Since you haven't punctuated this, I don't know what it means:

"The Trapezius starts at the point behind your skull across the left hand side 1across the top of your shoulder and goes to bottom of the spine quarter of the way up from the bottom of the spine is the lower Trapezius"

Is the Trapezius one muscle that is divided into two sections, upper and lower, or is it two muscles?

You've described one on the left. Is there one on the right as well?

"The levator scapular is the vertebrae from the neck to the shoulder" -- you say the levator scapular is a bone (vertebrae), but I thought we were talking about muscles here.

You have psoas in twice, once under 9 and once under 14. Was this intentional?

That's enough questions for the moment.

smiley - smiley G


Subbing Body Building

Post 2

intern1

i dont have a computer at the moment i am on my phone i will sort it in the new year


Subbing Body Building

Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

I've already handed this back to the eds, are there are far too many problems with it to be sorted by someone who doesn't know body building. I don't know what they're going to do.


Subbing Body Building

Post 4

intern1

What problems grammer spelling


Key: Complain about this post

Subbing Body Building

More Conversations for Andy

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more