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shazzPRME Started conversation Jan 13, 2002
I have just finished subbing your excellent Coin Collecting Entry and wondered if you would like to take a look through to check you like it before I send it back?
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A672013
shazz 
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Nireena Posted Jan 14, 2002
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Thanks! I looked through the article, and the only thing I noticed is that the "Collectors" paragraph seems a bit out of place there. Perhaps "Collectors" can be a subheading that goes directly after "Storing Coins", then "Learning about coins" can come just before "Getting started". The last sentence of the "Learning" section would flow well into "Getting started". Does that sound good? Other than that, the entry looks great!
Nireena
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shazzPRME Posted Jan 14, 2002
Take a look now then
I agree that it works better that way around indeed. 
shazz
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Nireena Posted Jan 15, 2002
Great! That order makes more sense. Looks like it's ready!
Thanks,
Nireena
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