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Post 1

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

Hi Danny smiley - smiley

Sorry about all the missing s in 'Wedding Trads' Entry.

In my version, by some fluke the worked without them.

It wasn't until I used in 'Robin' entry, and it 'behaved' differently that I found out I was suppose to use the s

Emmily
smiley - cracker


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Post 2

Danny B

I hadn't looked at the Entry yet, so thanks for the 'warning' smiley - winkeye

This is what sub-editors are here for, so I wouldn't worry about it smiley - smiley

smiley - cheers


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Post 3

Danny B

Well, I've now finished with this. If you'd like to take a look over it, it's at A3383633 - I've hardly made any changes to it smiley - smiley

I'll give it a day or so, and then send it back to the Editors.

smiley - cheers


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Post 4

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

smiley - cheers Danny, looks good smiley - biggrin

A couple of little points smiley - smiley

In 3rd para. under Engagement heading you've put

"Although making a proposal of marriage was generally a task for men,"

smiley - erm clean car, mow lawn and propose, is it really considered a task smiley - erm possibly change 'task' to responsibily or something similar.smiley - smiley

Last para. before The Reception heading.

"This apparently dates back around 200 years. King George III"

smiley - blush I had meant to change 200 years, to the relivant century with King George III, as this will 'date' but couldn't work out whether it was 17th or 18th century. smiley - erm history is not a strong point of mine. smiley - smiley

Emmily
smiley - rose


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Post 5

Danny B

Ahem... a task, yes...

smiley - laugh

Sorry - I'll change that to something more suitable. 'Chore' perhaps smiley - winkeye

The George III thing is either 'late 18th' or 'early 19th' Century. I'll add something, but keep it quite vague..!

smiley - cheers

Danny B.


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Post 6

Danny B

Sorted now! smiley - ok


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Post 7

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

smiley - erm Footnote 3 ~ 1860 - 1720

[In terrible imatation voice of Harry Enfield's 'old man']

I don't think you meant to do that. smiley - biggrin

Emmily
smiley - rose


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Post 8

Danny B

smiley - doh



I'd looked it up on Google, and was working on the Entry when my computer started playing up, so I thought I'd get something in quickly before it all crashed and got lost, but I couldn't load Google any more and so I had to type something from (my increasingly erratic) memory and...



Bear with me a moment...


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Post 9

Danny B

Right - let's try again!

We will get this finished, honest... smiley - erm


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Post 10

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

Ok smiley - magic no more points smiley - cheers Danny

Emmily
smiley - rose


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Post 11

Danny B

smiley - cool

It's now back with the Editors smiley - ok

smiley - cheers


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