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Subbing "Early American Trade"
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Apr 3, 2007
Hello Kyra 
It's me again!
Subbing your Entry "Early American Trade" A21388322
you need to go subscribe to the new page, and I'll start subbing!
GB 
Subbing "Early American Trade"
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 6, 2007
I've finished subbing, if you'd like to read it through and OK it, I'll return it to the Eds if you're happy
GB
Subbing "Early American Trade"
Kyra Posted Apr 6, 2007
81 million dollars-worth -> I don't like the dash there
the growing of tobacco soon became the most profitable crop in the North American colonies -> either get rid of 'the growing of' or change crop to business maybe?
relatively-cheap price in Africa -> Don't like the dash there either, is that Guide standard?
Sorry to nitpick Otherwise, great, thanks
Subbing "Early American Trade"
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 7, 2007
<>
No, it's just me
All changed
<> you have every right to! it's your entry. If you're happy, I'm happy
Right then, I'll press the 
button, it'll appear as "pending" on your PS and it'll wing its way back to the Editor's nest, see you on the Front Page!
GB
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