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Excellent entry on Life As A Union Black Soldier - really enjoyed it, well-written and poignant. Well done. smiley - ok


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Kyra

Thank you smiley - biggrin


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Kyra

By the way, the first sentence is annoying me. I had it:

For many, the United States Civil War was a fight for freedom, but for a time, those seeking to be free first had to fight for the right to fight for their freedom.

Bel changed it to :

For many, the United States Civil War was a fight for freedom, but for a time, those seeking to be free had to fight for the right to fight for their freedom first.

I think it sounds inelegant the second way, but I get that it could be confusing the way I had it.

Could you see which you like better? smiley - smiley


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Kyra

smiley - biggrin Thanks, I just saw you changed it back.


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Kyra

smiley - blush Ah, no you didn't. smiley - bigeyes Never mind


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