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The H2G2 Editors Started conversation Oct 20, 2006
Excellent entry on Life As A Union Black Soldier - really enjoyed it, well-written and poignant. Well done.
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Kyra Posted Oct 22, 2006
By the way, the first sentence is annoying me. I had it:
For many, the United States Civil War was a fight for freedom, but for a time, those seeking to be free first had to fight for the right to fight for their freedom.
Bel changed it to :
For many, the United States Civil War was a fight for freedom, but for a time, those seeking to be free had to fight for the right to fight for their freedom first.
I think it sounds inelegant the second way, but I get that it could be confusing the way I had it.
Could you see which you like better?
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