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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Oct 16, 2018
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Oct 16, 2018
Thank you, looks good!
some small things I noticed:
'Early Life' paragraph 3 ends with a bracket alone in a line in Pliny. Not sure if it can be helped but it looks strange.
'Cartoon' 1st sentence: should 'moderator' rather be 'presenter'? I may have gotten that wrong. Also it should say 'which WAS originally intended...' (not 'were')
you could add the following links (didn't think of them earlier, sorry):
1st paragraph 'Germany' A297092
'Loriot I-VI' 4th paragraph '42' A19229763
h2g2 Guide Editors Posted Dec 3, 2018
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