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The new Musicians Guild has decided to reference your excellent entry on The Beach Boys: The Early Years. The Guild hopes to bring together the musicians and music afficionados at h2g2, and you are certainly welcome to join. You can visit the Guild at http://www.h2g2.com/U150368

If you have written any other entries related to music, please pop by the Guild to make sure we haven't missed anything. In any case, thanks for writing an entry worth linking to.

Thanks. At the moment I haven't written any other musical entries other ythan one on my own band, but I should be writing more on the Beach Boys soon, plus some other stuff. I'll join immediately. Thanks again for linking the page.

I've just done a guide entry on this, at http://www.h2g2.com/A429860

Thanks for that. It looks super at a first glance.

The new Guild members are keeping me rather busy. I'll add your entry to the directory tomorrow.

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I've looked over the Solo Works page at last. It was exceptionally good, I thought. I will say as much in the Peer Review forum as well.

I'm an extremely nitpicky person. Here are my nitpicks for your entry. You got off exceedingly light for such a long entry.

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Under the sub-header Sweet Insanity (Unreleased), look carefully at the first sentence. The word Wilson in italics has a tiny typo as WIlson (with a capital I).

Under the sub-header Imagination, you mention the album is Wilson's most recent studio album, but you don't tell me what year it was released in. I'm just curious. Slip the year in somewhere if you can manage it please.

Now check under the sub-header Live At The Roxy. The fourth paragraph is one huge sentence. Normally I am understanding about this, but I had to read it three times to get it all. Consider dividing it up into multiple sentences.

Next let's go to the header Carl Wilson. Look at the last sentence of the last paragraph. The sentence doesn't start with a capital letter. I'm sure it's just a typo.

Finally, look under the header Other Members at the bottom of the entry. The third sentence seems very confusing to me. Is this what you really meant to say?

"The only solo Jardine has seen released is a duet with his son Matt, billed as 'Alan and Matt Jardine of the Beach Boys' or 'Papa loves Mama' on a Garth Brooks tribute CD."

Good job, by the way! I doubt anyone could have written this but yourself.

Thanks - I've corrected everything ...
Thanks again for your help, and also your kind words. I do actually know half a dozen people who could have written this, better in fact than my attempt, but they don't appear to be on h2g2...

Yes, but if you know them it's because you're a diehard Beach Boys fan.