A Conversation for Evening Primrose, or What Happens If You Live in a Department Store

Peer Review: A88028733 - Evening Primrose, or What Happens If You Live in a Department Store

Post 1

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Entry: Evening Primrose, or What Happens If You Live in a Department Store - A88028733
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor - U1590784

I enjoyed the musical 'Evening Primrose' and I'm glad to put this one back up, title and all.

I proofread it and check that the links work. It should be okay, but let me know if you find anything.

smiley - dragon


A88028733 - Evening Primrose, or What Happens If You Live in a Department Store

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad

Thanks DG smiley - ok

Looks good to me. Just a couple of things I spotted:

" listen to it here" - " listen to it on archive.org"

" watch it here" - " watch it on archive.org"

"If you like, you can watch it here." - "If you like, you can watch it on YouTube."

I like the postscript smiley - ok


A88028733 - Evening Primrose, or What Happens If You Live in a Department Store

Post 3

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Thanks, Sasha, changed. smiley - ok


A88028733 - Evening Primrose, or What Happens If You Live in a Department Store

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - ok


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 5

h2g2 auto-messages

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!


Key: Complain about this post

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more