A Conversation for 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film

Peer Review: A87941505 - 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film - A87941505
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Perfect unpretentious Saturday-morning entertainment.

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Post 2

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

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I enjoyed reading this and only had two questions:

You don't say who Dietz is at first.

"as Amicus' implosion ended" - "after Amicus ended"?

smiley - ok


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Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks, I've tweaked that now.

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Post 4

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

smiley - ok


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Post 5

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

A good Entry! smiley - smiley I found it interesting to read and well written.


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Post 6

Bluebottle

Tad tweaked to remove some of the Amicus detail.

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Post 7

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - cheers


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Post 8

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Just reading this again, I noticed "there's a more complicated society than you can easily handle" - should that be 'can't'?

Excellent concluding paragraph smiley - ok


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Post 9

Bluebottle

Thanks for re-reading - I checked and it is definitely more than you can handle, not more than you can't handle.

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Post 10

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Ah, yes - I see it now smiley - ok


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Post 12

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Congratulations! smiley - bubblysmiley - biggrin


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