h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Sir Derek Bibby - Businessman and Philanthropist - A87976020
Author: SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad' - U9936370

Here is a little Entry inspired by this month's Create Challenge A87972871 about a man who made a difference to his world with daffodils

That was very kind - to memorialise a neighbour. And it's a good biography.

Do you think you could lead in with the daffodils in some way? Say something along the lines of 'every spring, people who live in the ____ area (or who pass by this street, etc) are greeted with a startling display of daffodils, and they remember Sir Derek Bibby'? Not exactly that, but somewhat along those lines? That way, you're leading with the positive aspect.

Thanks DG

Excellent idea - I have reworked the introduction so it has a much better flavour

That looks great!

Thank you

I managed to find a copy of Sir Derek's autobiography so I have added more detail about his early life

'before it was a theme park',

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