A Conversation for 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film

Peer Review: A87999881 - 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film - A87999881
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

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A87999881 - 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad

Informative - I certainly know the song, but didn't know the film of the same name.

"whose father leaves and later runs off to join the circus" - I see the boy runs off to join the circus, not the father.

Fascinating fact about Dame Judi Dench!

"much to Mike's disgust" - Jim's disgust?

Excellent footnotes

Incisive review - makes a strong conclusion to the Entry smiley - applause


A87999881 - 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks for reading - I've tweaked the two sentences you spotted so that they're hopefully easier to understand.

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A87999881 - 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film

Post 4

Bluebottle

Note to self: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-hampshire-54802746

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A87999881 - 'That'll Be The Day' - the Film

Post 5

SashaQ - happysad

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Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

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Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

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SashaQ - happysad

Congratulations. smiley - bubblysmiley - biggrin


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