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Bluebottle

Entry: The Ultimate DreamWorks Animated Film Guide: 2010-2014 - A87856889
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

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A87856889 - The Ultimate DreamWorks Animated Film Guide: 2010-2014

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SashaQ - happysad - Editor

Good to see this in Peer Review smiley - ok

At the beginning, I'd like to see a footnote to tell us which was the box office disaster.

"who has perverted fireworks" a fascinating choice of words - the mind boggles...

Do you say in this Entry what the bold text signifies?

Perhaps say that Rocky and Bullwinkle was from the same time as Mr Peabody?

"led to DreamWorks Animations' PDI studio closing" - what does this mean? Something to do with Antz?

Dreamworks Animation was taken over in early 2016?

Perhaps reorder the last paragraph to put the bits about the movie first, then finish with the fate of DreamWorks Animation.

smiley - ok I enjoyed reading that - I've not seen any of these.


A87856889 - The Ultimate DreamWorks Animated Film Guide: 2010-2014

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Bluebottle

Thanks for your good points and suggestions there.smiley - ok

I've added the footnote and added an introduction to explain the bold text. created a final section in which I have explained the PDI reference a bit more and mentioned DreamWorks Animation being taken over by NBC Universal (who own Illunimation). Which was for $3.8 billion, so less than Disney's takeover of Marvel and about half of what Disney paid for Pixar.

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SashaQ - happysad - Editor

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bobstafford

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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