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A3999540 - Arizona Animules And Their Wiley Ways

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Entry: Arizona Animules And Their Wiley Ways - A3999540
Author: ArizonIain - U1535223

Okay, after careful consideraton, slightly more time than was allowed by trying to also do 'work' and the critiques from my initial uninformed submission, here's the version with all those wee bits that I originally thought about but couldn't write fast enough to remember the first time. Now to hear the whispers of my peers as I hold my breath and clench my buttocks awaiting the reaction. Maybe that's why they call these things a second draught?

A3999540 - Arizona Animules And Their Wiley Ways

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LL Waz

Following on from the previous thread - it's a way smiley - cool first attempt.

It's good on a second read, which is good given that the shock factor has worn off.

First time through I reread the first few sentences a few times because something was throwing me there but I couldn't pin down what it was. Whatever it was it's not there now.

It seemed smoother this time, but that might be the shock factor thing.

Cheers again for the entertainment,

(PS mind what age you attribute 'antique' to around here smiley - winkeye.)

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Congratulations Arizonlain smiley - bubbly! This entry has been selected from the Alternative Writing Workshop and accepted for the <./>UnderGuide</.>

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