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A20771868 - Life

Post 1

Flame

Entry: Life - A20771868
Author: Flameisgold - U1652413

I'm not a poet by any means - and this is my first attempt at this type of work. It's about life...

Any comments or suggestion will be appreciated!


A20771868 - Life

Post 2

minorvogonpoet

A brave attitude- I wish I had thought like that when I was younger.
smiley - smiley
As for the poetry, I really liked "I will colour all dreams in the palm of my hands". I'm not sure whether it's a good idea to repeat the word 'life' so many times.


A20771868 - Life

Post 3

U1250369



It's always special to read something of yours, Flame.


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