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A11942633 - MONTANA REMAINS

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TRiG (Ireland) A dog, so bade in office

Entry: MONTANA REMAINS - A11942633
Author: carlylyn - U4064117

Carly (author) seems to have left.

PR thread: F4370335?thread=3038637

Underguide thread: F1684971?thread=3046105 (An unsuccessful attempt at submitting this to the Underguide by means of starting a conversation which has so far received no comments.)

Hope this is okay and that I'm breaching no rules of etiquette by submitting another person's output.

I liked it anyway. It had some positive feedback in PR too.

TRiG.


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Post 2

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

It may even encourage Carly to come back, if she sees her work is appreciated.


smiley - magic


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Post 3

Pinniped


Nice work this, at two levels. Good writing, beautiful eulogy.

Thanks for posting it. Let's hope the writer hasn't elvised, because this is just the kind of Entry we want to build on.

Doesn't help when the treadmill jumps its bearings, though, does it?smiley - cross


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Post 4

U1250369

I enjoyed this.

Beautifully descriptive.


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Post 5

UnderGuide Editors

Offering congratulations carlylynn smiley - bubbly, your ‘Montana Remains’ piece has been selected as an <./>underguide</.> entry to be featured on h2g2’s Front Page. Probably in four to eight week’s time, but that’s just a rough guide.

An UnderGuide Gem Polisher will post to your personal space, or here, for any final revisions or tweakings they or you might want or suggest, before creating the UG copy of the entry for the Front Page.

Congrats again, and many thanks for contributing here smiley - smiley. It’s a moving piece. In UnderGuide discussions it was termed a rewarding read from an author that can think as well as write. And so it is.


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Post 6

U1250369

Well done Carlylyn, and thanks Trig for bringing Montana Remains to life !smiley - bubbly


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