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A970805 - Supermarket IMF [unfinished]

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friendlywithteeth

Entry: Supermarket IMF [unfinished] - A970805
Author: friendlywithteeth the ACE: Danger! Danger! High Voltage! [Invading the AWW] - U193729

This needs some more work on it, as it's unfinished: but hey, you can read what's there!


A970805 - Supermarket IMF [unfinished]

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The HitchHiker's Guide To The Galaxy Spaced Out Edition

haven't you ever heard of "don't submit entries for review until they are ready for review?"


A970805 - Supermarket IMF [unfinished]

Post 3

friendlywithteeth

What business is it of yours spook?


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The HitchHiker's Guide To The Galaxy Spaced Out Edition

u just don't get anything, do you?

smiley - doh


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friendlywithteeth

No: no I probably don't, but it's never bothered me before, why should it start now?


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a girl called Ben

I like the metaphor, and it is well sustained. The question is - would it be even better if the metaphor was extended and the entry was longer?

In the meantime - this is still a Workshop - and ok for working on works in progress.

B


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friendlywithteeth

I have another bit in mind, but didn't have the time to complete it...and alas I don't now either :-S

I just plonked it in here, because then I won't forget about it: it'll be done soon smiley - smiley


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Post 8

J

...he said three weeks ago, and it remains unfinished. smiley - winkeye

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 9

friendlywithteeth

But I have had connection problems, and have added a bit since I last posted smiley - nahnah

smiley - winkeye


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Tube - the being being back for the time being

It is still unfiniashed business, I suppose? smiley - winkeye


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friendlywithteeth

It's grown a bit, but yes still unfinished smiley - smiley

And thank you for being patient with me because I'm still getting the shock/hang of it/ sorting things out to go to uni/ getting over not being at a summer camp, and lots of different stuff smiley - laugh


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2 of 3

Well I am quite keen to see this one finished. Good of you tackle a topic as good as the IMF.

Reminds me of one version of what the letters IMF stand for . . .
I couldn't type it here as it would be editef out. But the I is ignorant and the MF is the same as in the Prince song Sexy MF.

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