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Peer Review: A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
BobI Started conversation Aug 31, 2018
Entry: Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers - A87916846
Author: BobI - U15003083
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A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Sep 1, 2018
This is hugely entertaining! 
I happen to know a dedicated reader of Louis L'Amour westerns, so I was interested.
I have one tiny suggestion:
>>He can stalk enemies so silently....<<
May I suggest you take out the word 'so'? I was expecting 'so silently, that....'
I like your suggestion about the telephone book. 
Western stories seem to give all their heroes British Isles names, don't they? Strong-sounding ones, though. Can you imagine a Sheriff Entwhistle?
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Sep 1, 2018
I'm definitely not in the target group, but I really enjoyed reading this!
A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
bobstafford Posted Sep 1, 2018
Well done you make the books sound interesting, tempted to go out and find one of these to read. 
A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
BobI Posted Sep 2, 2018
Thank you Dmitri!
I take your point about the 'so' - that has been taken out now.
That's funny - I was just thinking about using the name Entwhistle. I'm sure Rupert Entwhistle would make an extremely fine sheriff, honest 
A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
BobI Posted Sep 2, 2018
Thank you Tavaron and bobstafford
Be very careful reading a Black Horse Western - they are highly addictive
A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Sep 2, 2018
Okay, now when you write your story about Sheriff Rupert Entwhistle, we expect to run it in the 
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Sep 7, 2018
I really like this too
The only thing I wondered was: could you give an example of the vernacular dialogue?
A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
BobI Posted Sep 7, 2018
Yes. A sample of dialogue has been added. I also added more about Louis L'Amour.
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Sep 7, 2018
I like the dialogue, but blush to note that it made perfect sense to me. 
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Dec 20, 2018
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BobI Posted Feb 3, 2019
Thank you
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bobstafford Posted Feb 3, 2019
Well done great entry 
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Peer Review: A87916846 - Black Horse Westerns and Their Readers
- 1: BobI (Aug 31, 2018)
- 2: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Sep 1, 2018)
- 3: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor (Sep 1, 2018)
- 4: bobstafford (Sep 1, 2018)
- 5: BobI (Sep 2, 2018)
- 6: BobI (Sep 2, 2018)
- 7: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Sep 2, 2018)
- 8: SashaQ - happysad (Sep 7, 2018)
- 9: BobI (Sep 7, 2018)
- 10: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Sep 7, 2018)
- 11: h2g2 auto-messages (Dec 20, 2018)
- 12: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Dec 20, 2018)
- 13: Elektragheorgheni -Please read 'The Post' (Dec 20, 2018)
- 14: SashaQ - happysad (Dec 20, 2018)
- 15: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor (Dec 20, 2018)
- 16: BobI (Feb 3, 2019)
- 17: bobstafford (Feb 3, 2019)
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