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SashaQ - happysad Started conversation Apr 2, 2017
Entry: Jaguar - a Car Manufacturer Born to Perform? - A87887092
Author: SashaQ - happysad - Editor - U9936370
Original Entry: Jaguar - Born to Perform? - A10114732
Original Author: Rains - Wondering where time's going and why it's in so much of a hurry! - U205100
I have already rescued Rains' Entry about Rover, so I decided to take on the Jaguar brand next...
A87887092 - Jaguar - a Car Manufacturer Born to Perform?
Bluebottle Posted Apr 5, 2017
Excellent work! I've just got a couple of comments to make, if I may?
I'm not sure the Juan Manuel Fangio, Moss & Hawthorn section is as clear as it can be as to who is driving for Jaguar and who for Mercedes Benz. I wasn't sure when you said they were driving alongside, do you mean they were both in the same team, or at the time of the accident they were driving neck-and-neck next to each other? Whose Mercedes-Benz drove into the crowd, and was a Jaguar alongside at the time of the accident?
I also think you should clarify that since 2008, when Tata finalised the purchase of both companies from Ford, Jaguar has been part of a company called Jaguar Land Rover.
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Bluebottle Posted Jun 9, 2017
Do you agree?
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jun 9, 2017
Thanks for reading, and sorry I missed your comments until now.
I agree the 1955 Le Mans section was not clear, so I've tweaked it and hope that is an improvement.
I have mentioned Jaguar Land Rover Ltd
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