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A4060207 - The Follies of Youth
MrRollyPollyCat Started conversation May 13, 2005
Entry: The Follies of Youth - A4060207
Author: MrRollyPollyCat - U887838
For all my friends who think that rushing their lives will mean rushing their success.
A4060207 - The Follies of Youth
LL Waz Posted May 14, 2005
"some of them won't be happy until they've either killed themselves or damaged themselves beyond repair." ouch. Yes 
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Old and wise beyond your years, if I'm right about your years. A well written piece, again, and a clearly made message.
One small typo, I only mention it because I think it changes the meaning of an important sentence. Have you missed a comma after rush in "My plea to you all is to not rush young people."?
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