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A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 1

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Freshly Vaccinated

Entry: Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot - A88028265
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - Freshly Vaccinated - U1590784

A bit about the invention of the mugshot, with a few examples.

We can't use the toddler picture, it's privately owned. But I linked to it.

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A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

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SashaQ - happysad

Great Entry! Good to know the full story behind the Picture Quiz from last year A87984265smiley - biggrin

My only suggestion for improvement is: “ After all, they didn't want them for keepsakes.” to change to something like “After all, they weren’t needed for keepsakes” - (just to be clear about who/what ‘they’ refers to)

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A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 3

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Freshly Vaccinated

Good idea, thanks, Sasha! smiley - ok


A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

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A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 5

Superfrenchie

I enjoyed this! smiley - biggrin

Last section, 2nd paragraph, shouldn't
'Come down to headquarters and look at few mugbooks'
be
"*a* few mugbooks", maybe?

Otherwise, this Entry is really good, both informative and fun to read. smiley - ok


A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 6

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Freshly Vaccinated

Ah, thanks for the reading and the good catch, Superfrenchie! smiley - hug


A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 7

Superfrenchie

To be completely honest, I had read it a while ago, and couldn't comment at the time; then today I stumbled upon an article in an online newspaper that mentioned Bertillon and remembered you smiley - ok


A88028265 - Alphonse Bertillon Invents the Mugshot

Post 8

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Freshly Vaccinated

smiley - cool


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