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A87998495 - Update: A292501 - Country Music

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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

Entry: Update: A292501 - Country Music - A87998495
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China - U1590784

Update: A292501 - Country Music by Alaska U107501
Editor: Asteroid Lil U81931

I decided this one needed an update and some more context about the background of country music. And it needed to mention the Austin Lounge Lizards and Jimmie Rodgers.

If anything's unclear, let me know.

ALSO: We could probably use a new illustration...


smiley - dragon


A87998495 - Update: A292501 - Country Music

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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Big improvement, thanks.smiley - smiley
And yes, I absolutely agree about the picture.


A87998495 - Update: A292501 - Country Music

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Thank you smiley - ok

One sentence I wasn't clear about: "Armed Forces Radio included the weekly radio broadcasts of the Grand Ole Opry and National Barn Dance to their repertoire." - *added* them to their repertoire?

Excellent concluding paragraph smiley - ok


A87998495 - Update: A292501 - Country Music

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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

Yeah, or 'included in'. Sorry, I didn't catch that before. I'll go change it. smiley - run

Thanks!


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