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A87996631 - Baroque Art – All For One
Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Started conversation Aug 28, 2020
Entry: Baroque Art – All For One - A87996631
Author: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor - U1314679
The next part of the series, just in time after the Renaissance is done. I'm afriad it'S again a few hundred words longer than I'd have liked it to be.
It was difficult to draw a line between art and architechture in the BAroque, but I did my best.
A87996631 - Baroque Art – All For One
SashaQ - happysad Posted Aug 29, 2020
Excellent Thank you very much - very interesting
"It was the last large all-encompasing arts style in Europe" - I'm not sure I understand what that means.
"The emotions boiling up inside people are visualized through the many folds of their clothes." - superb!
"copying popular in large quantities." - popular paintings?
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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China Posted Dec 3, 2020
Sorry for the length of this list.
>>regeneration of the Catholic Church. <<
I don't think 'regeneration' is quite the right word. Resurgence? (What is it in German?)
>>to lead believers in the right way.<<
That sounds like taking sides. Could you say 'to provide moral inspiration'?
>>Baroque arts has<<
'Baroque art has', or 'the baroque arts have'. Choose singular or plural.
I love the opera part.
Could you please put the scientists in a separate paragraph?
>>They were naturalistic but not cool.<<
The word 'cool' isn't doing it for me here. Can you think of another word? What is missing from this naturalism?
>>the emergence of more arts critiques and writings on this matter.<<
Did you mean 'an increase in critical writing about the arts'?
>>a new ware.<<
Not in English. How about, 'The arts became a matter of interest and public discussion, something to write about. They also provided new goods that could be bought, sold, or traded.'
>>Gesamtkunstwerk<<
I'd go ahead and say something like 'Gesamtkunstwerk, or 'total work of art.' I would do this even though 'Gesamtkunstwerk' is a loan word in English - because lots of people don't know what it means.
>>Ceiling paintings were also a very suitable thing for churches, of course. <<
Why 'of course'? I'd leave it out.
>>The study of antique arts<<
'The study of the arts of antiquity'. [These days, 'antique' as an adjective is going to make people think of second-hand shops. My coffee table is antique. It is not Roman.]
I love the last sentence.
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jan 6, 2021
Hi Tav, you have one instance of "colour" (correct) and 5 instances of "coluor" (incorrect).
Gesamtkunstwerk - a total work of art - I didn't know what that meant, I doubt I can pronounce it Thanks for the lesson
GB
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