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A87996433 - Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates.

Post 1

FWR (Flamin' Crumpet Productions General Flunky)

Entry: Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates. - A87996433
Author: FWR (Flamin' Crumpet Productions General Flunky) - U14998677

The story of one of the Wirral's most infamous buildings and it's proprietor.


A87996433 - Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates.

Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

smiley - applause Wonderful tale, well-told!

The fake weathervane is a masterful touch! smiley - rofl

And now I'm having flashbacks to an old black-and-white movie of 'Jamaica Inn', with Emlyn Williams...


A87996433 - Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates.

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FWR (Flamin' Crumpet Productions General Flunky)

My old music teacher, Mr Shaw, first taught us about this rather dubious lady! Forty-odd years ago and I can still remember some the song he wrote for us to sing in the local choir competition!smiley - cheerssmiley - whistle


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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Fantastic - thanks for sharing Poll Jones' story with us smiley - ok I learned a lot, as I'd not heard of Redcap's before smiley - ok


A87996433 - Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates.

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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

smiley - cool I'll bet you were a big hit! It's those personal touches that make education worthwhile.


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - cool That's very intersting!

I only have the feeling (and others may disagree) that you give away too much alrady in the first few sentences. smiley - laugh


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FWR (Flamin' Crumpet Productions General Flunky)

Sorry Tav, do you mean the opening song lyrics? I'll have a think. smiley - cheers


A87996433 - Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates.

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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

I don't think the song gives too much away - I think it sets the scene and makes the reader interested. smiley - smiley


A87996433 - Old Mother Red Cap - Poll Jones, friend to the Pirates.

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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

No, sorry for the confusion, I didn't mean the lyrics but the first few sentences after that. But just leave it as it is. smiley - smiley


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