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A87977731 - 'Into the Labyrinth' - the Television Series

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: 'Into the Labyrinth' - the Television Series - A87977731
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

You cannot deny this had the Nidus touchsmiley - magic

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A87977731 - 'Into the Labyrinth' - the Television Series

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

smiley - magic The title reminds me of the film A87790567 so I'm not surprised you have seen this smiley - ok Good to see there is a link to 'The Children of the Stones', too smiley - ok

" Cheddar. Cheesy" - smiley - laughsmiley - ok

Just a couple of typos I spotted: Davey --> Davy, and Seperation --> Separation.

Is chromakey an early form of green screen, or is it that green screen is an example of chromakey? I have a few chromakey options in the video editing software I use, but I am very much a novice when it comes to overlays (although I did manage something in one of my Discord videos A87924595 ) so I haven't used them yet.


A87977731 - 'Into the Labyrinth' - the Television Series

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks for the read-through, you know I do enjoy a spooky stone story...

I've made some tweaks - I didn't want to get too technical but you're right that that smiley - footprintssmiley - musicalnote wasn't quite right and so I've tweaked it now.

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A87977731 - 'Into the Labyrinth' - the Television Series

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

smiley - ok


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