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A87984508 - Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks

Post 1

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Entry: Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks - A87984508
Author: SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad' - U9936370

Here's another little bird Entry. I like avocets - very graceful birds


A87984508 - Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks

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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

smiley - applause Thanks for this! It's nice to learn about new birds - and I'd never heard of this upcurved beak business. What a cool adaptation!


A87984508 - Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Thank you smiley - biggrin

Yes, I learned a lot from researching this Entry - a cool adaptation indeed!


A87984508 - Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks

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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Very good Entry!

I only find the first paragraph a bit... sudden? Not sure. It probably could do with 1 or 2 sentences of a slower introduction, if you know what I mean? smiley - huh


A87984508 - Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Thanks Tav smiley - biggrin

Yes, I see what you mean - 'sudden' is the word for those two sentences smiley - laugh I have expanded the first paragraph, so I hope that helps smiley - ok


A87984508 - Avocets - Wading Birds with Upcurved Beaks

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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - ok That's a lot better. smiley - smiley


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