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A87875581 - The Ultimate Disney Classic Animated Film Guide: 2015-2019

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Bluebottle

Entry: The Ultimate Disney Classic Animated Film Guide: 2015-2019 - A87875581
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Another entry to celebrate the New Year.

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A87875581 - The Ultimate Disney Classic Animated Film Guide: 2015-2019

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Yay! Thank you - I’ve not seen any of these so I appreciate the summary.

Good opening section, to set the scene. The last sentence just needs eg mention that the dark side would catch up with him by the end of the decade, to signpost the reader to the end of the Entry.

I like the band puns in Zootropolis smiley - laugh

Gramma tells the legend with help from ?

The word ‘frigid’ is a slur that doesn’t sound like it is intended... Would ‘asexual’ or ‘aromantic’ be what is needed? (no sexual/romantic attraction to other people)

I like the Fifth Element reference smiley - laugh

Strong ending - sets the scene for the next instalment smiley - ok


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Bluebottle

Don't you hate it when your train of thought operates a delayed rail replacement smiley - bus service... I'll get back to you...

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Ah, yes smiley - bus that is frustrating when that happens smiley - laugh


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