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A87941505 - 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film

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Bluebottle

Entry: 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film - A87941505
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Perfect unpretentious Saturday-morning entertainment.

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A87941505 - 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film

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SashaQ - happysad

smiley - ok

I enjoyed reading this and only had two questions:

You don't say who Dietz is at first.

"as Amicus' implosion ended" - "after Amicus ended"?

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A87941505 - 'The Land that Time Forgot' - the Film

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks, I've tweaked that now.

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SashaQ - happysad

smiley - ok


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

A good Entry! smiley - smiley I found it interesting to read and well written.


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