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A87941695 - LGBT+ Hidden Histories

Post 1

SashaQ - happysad

Entry: LGBT+ Hidden Histories - A87941695
Author: SashaQ - happysad - U9936370

Here is a linktastic Entry inspired by this month's Create Challenge A87941082 - I'm not sure if it has quite the flavour I was hoping for, so I appreciate your feedback to improve it smiley - biggrin

A87941695 - LGBT+ Hidden Histories

Post 2

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Soo... hm. I'm not sure in fact.

I have the feeling there is too much general information without giving a 'complete' overview and on the other hand you give examples without telling much about them but mainly post links to other Entries.

A87941695 - LGBT+ Hidden Histories

Post 3

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

Hm....it seems to me that a thesis is arising out of your survey that says, more or less, that pioneers in LGBTQ+ rights have made really important changes in society?

Maybe start with that as a bold statement, and group the survey around recognising these pioneers in their different spheres of activity?

Also, could you maybe frame this entry as a 'guide to the Guide' on the subject? It might serve as a template for more like this in other fields of interest. smiley - smiley

A87941695 - LGBT+ Hidden Histories

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

Thanks Tav - you've put into words why this doesn't have the right flavour for my taste. That is very useful feedback for me to ponder smiley - ok

The Entry is currently only 691 words long, so I can afford to add more helpful words.

A87941695 - LGBT+ Hidden Histories

Post 5

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - simpost

Thanks DG - that is also useful feedback to ponder smiley - ok

I've made a start on refocusing the Entry and will continue working through to make improvements smiley - ok

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