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A87917700 - The Ultimate Disney MovieToons Animated Film Guide: 2000-2004

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Bluebottle

Entry: The Ultimate Disney MovieToons Animated Film Guide: 2000-2004 - A87917700
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Part II of IV in the story of an unappreciated animation studio.

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SashaQ - happysad

Good to see this in Peer Review smiley - ok

The Competitors section is good - sets things into context well.

Perhaps just need to emphasise in The Tigger Movie that the film is set in the UK (or is it actually set in a fictional wood in the USA for this film, hence the avalanche?). That is impressive that the film beat Fantasia 2000 and The Road to El Dorado at the box office!

"Nickelodoen" --> "Nickelodeon"

"The characters deserve better than this plot." - yes indeed...

"Will Scamp get damp" smiley - snorksmiley - ok That is disappointing that the film fails the Bechdel Test when Lady is so underused as a character so it could have been better...

"Anastastia" --> "Anastasia"

Jaq's dream/wish comes true? I can't argue with the prunes/chocolate cake sentence, though! smiley - ok

"Made six years after The Hunchback of Notre Dame, the difference in the quality of animation is apparent. " - improved, or not improved?

The Plot paragraph of 101 Dalmatians II "is in London where to hold auditions to appear on the show." - Thunderbolt is holding the auditions, or is in London where auditions are taking place?

The Plot paragraph of Piglet's BIG Movie needs a bit of a tweak, too.

You mention 'Disney Video Premier(e)s' twice - fits better in the Disneytoon Studios section.

I think you might be better finishing the Entry here, as that is enough for one sitting... The next instalment can then start cleanly with DisneyToon smiley - ok


A87917700 - The Ultimate Disney MovieToons Animated Film Guide: 2000-2004

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Bluebottle

Thanks for those tweaks, changes have been made.smiley - ok

"Made six years after The Hunchback of Notre Dame, the difference in the quality of animation is apparent. " - improved, or not improved?
I wouldn't say it is case of not being improved, more a case that 'The Hunchback of Notre Dame' was made for $100million while the sequel was made quicker and cheaper. With animated films always look to see how much of what you are seeing is actually moving – real animated movement, and not just the camera pan and scanning from side to side. Particularly the background characters right at the back. So the opening shot for the sequel has a lovely flat image of Paris, like a painting, that the camera moves down and around following. The image itself is lovely, but it is still one flat image. For the original the opening sequence is animated so that it looks like the camera enters the picture and sweeps around Paris rather than just looking at it.

At the moment this is the longest entry in the series and in many ways it would make sense to divide it at the rebranding point. This would then mean the third entry either gets longer or split in half so before I commit to anything I'll give any other readers a week or so to let me know what they think as well as give it some thought myself.

If it does get divided then the two Disney Video Premieres mentions would each be in a separate entry so I won't change the fact that I discuss it twice at the moment.

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Bluebottle

This entry has been divided.

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SashaQ - happysad

Thank you smiley - ok

Ah, so the fact that six years had elapsed did not have a significant effect on the quality that could be produced at a cheap price, I see smiley - ok

Good information about the animators' knowledge of Sussex smiley - ok

Good change to the Dreams Come True section smiley - ok

Interesting what you noticed about Baloo - I don't recall having seen Jungle Book 2 but strangely my mental image of Baloo is of him being grey-blue, even though I have seen The Jungle Book and see that he was grey in that... smiley - huh Ah smiley - eureka I might have seen part of the film on TV one Christmas, now I come to think of it - that would make sense...

The Entry ends neatly now smiley - ok


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Bluebottle

smiley - ta I've tweaked it to make the Hundred Akers consistent.

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