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A87929293 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1962 - 1964

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1962 - 1964 - A87929293
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

The second half of the former 'The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1958 - 1964'.

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A87929293 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1962 - 1964

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad

Excellent - I was able to read this in one sitting smiley - magic

Mention of Charles Hawtrey's alcoholism and the machine in the middle of discussion of James Bond in Carry on Spying disrupted the flow a bit - I wonder if you can tighten up the section by bringing the James Bond references together. The comparison with The Living Daylights is fascinating smiley - ok

It would be good if you could say a sentence to fortell what comes next, as you did in A87899774smiley - ok


A87929293 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1962 - 1964

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks for your comments there, I've made those two changes.smiley - ok

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A87929293 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1962 - 1964

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

Nicely done smiley - ok


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