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A87915603 - The Venus Novels by Edgar Rice Burroughs

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Bluebottle

Entry: The Venus Novels by Edgar Rice Burroughs - A87915603
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

I've read it
Yeah, baby, I've read it
Burrough's Venus
I've read all five
For Peer Review.

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A87915603 - The Venus Novels by Edgar Rice Burroughs

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bobstafford

smiley - ok


A87915603 - The Venus Novels by Edgar Rice Burroughs

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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

I found this good to read and interesting. It's quite long but it all seems to make sense.

There's only one thing rather at the start I didn't understand:
In the 'Pirates of Venus' section the mention of the princess and that Carson rescues here comes quite suddenly. I am missing some kind of sentence about how they know each other or what made them appoint Carson to rescue her.


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Bluebottle

Thanks for your comments there – I've amended that section to hopefully make Napier and Duare's relationship clearer.smiley - ok

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