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A87906801 - Paulton's Park, Hampshire, UK

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Bluebottle

Entry: Paulton's Park, Hampshire, UK - A87906801
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Who doesn't love a theme park, eh?

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bobstafford

Good work very interesting historysmiley - ok

Well done smiley - applause


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Post 3

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

A very, very thorough description. In some places I must confess I would prefer it a bit shorter, like hwere you have a separate header for rides where you have only one sentence to say. Maybe you could just summarize them in a separarate paragraph?


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SashaQ - happysad - Editor

Good point Tav - it is perhaps too thorough to stand the test of time, as even small changes to the rides will cause the Entry to become dated very quickly... Summary paragraphs would be more durable smiley - ok You could keep your descriptions in a separate Entry within h2g2, though, so if someone does search for a specific ride they would find the information you've written smiley - biggrin

I like the information about the Gardens - things changed since Capability's day... Again, though, a summary rather than a list would be more durable, like you've done with the birds smiley - ok

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Post 5

Bluebottle

That's a fair point, so I've compressed the descriptions of the smaller rides and attractions together into shared paragraphs. Especially the generic rides that are similar to rides found at theme parks universally. The main rides and attractions – ie, everything in Peppa Pig World, Lost Kingdom and the other big rides – have retained their separate sections. While the older, generic rides between the two big lands will probably be replaced sooner or later, they're not going to do anything to demolish Peppa Pig World or Lost Kingdom considering they recently spent millions on them and they are what have put Paulton's Park on the map.

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