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A87905334 - 'Terminator Salvation' - the Film

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: 'Terminator Salvation' - the Film - A87905334
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

This is a film set in the far-off dystopian future world of 2018.

I struggled with finding the perfect opening line for this entry. I didn't want it to be overly negative, but also I didn't want to give the wrong impression and inadvertently leave people thinking this is a better film than it is. After much thought, consideration and deliberation I have written an opening sentence which I think covers absolutely everything that needs to be said about 'Terminator Salvation' – the rest of the entry is just filler.

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A87905334 - 'Terminator Salvation' - the Film

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad - Editor

smiley - laughsmiley - ok

It will be good to see this on the Front Page in 2018, which I think will be doable smiley - goodluck as the Entry is looking good so far! Great humour smiley - evilgrin

I had a feq questions on first readthrough:

"It originally had been intended to be a sequel to Terminator 3: Rise of the Machines (2003), set in the post-apocalyptic world seen at that film's end, had been written." What had been written?

What was the impact of the Writer's Guild Strike?

What is the relevance of mentioniong Jonathan Nolan?

What are 'practical effects'?

You mention Stan Winston twice and I think after the table is the best place to record the dedication.

" the future isn't what it used to be" smiley - laugh Well put!

Superb concluding paragraph smiley - ok

Sounds like there were some great ideas for what the plot of the film should be, but then they just threw all the ideas into the pot and mixed them in...


A87905334 - 'Terminator Salvation' - the Film

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks for those suggestions, I've updated the entry. smiley - smiley

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