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A87896146 - Jennie Hodgers aka Albert Cashier - Pioneering Soldier

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SashaQ - happysad - Editor

Entry: Jennie Hodgers aka Albert Cashier - Pioneering Soldier - A87896146
Author: SashaQ - happysad - Editor - U9936370

This Entry is dedicated to Elektra in thanks for introducing me to Albert Cashier's story.


A87896146 - Jennie Hodgers aka Albert Cashier - Pioneering Soldier

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minorvogonpoet

This is an intriguing story.smiley - smiley

I had read the Guardian story about transgender people in the military, so I'd heard of Albert Cashier. I also wondered about St Joan!

I wondered if you should put a link to the story of Dr Barry - A8785078- then I realised you wrote that one too!

There is one slightly odd sentence starting "He used his size".I think that, after "achieving the objective", you just need "of"


A87896146 - Jennie Hodgers aka Albert Cashier - Pioneering Soldier

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SashaQ - happysad - Editor

Thanks MVP smiley - biggrin

I've added in a couple of links to other Entries of mine smiley - blush and tweaked the sentence that was odd, so hopefully it is less odd now.

smiley - ok


A87896146 - Jennie Hodgers aka Albert Cashier - Pioneering Soldier

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Dmitri Gheorgheni

Looks good to me - very interesting! smiley - smiley

Sometimes it just makes me so mad, the way people treat each other, that I don't have anything useful to say. Thanks for getting this story out there. smiley - hug


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